Why bridges resonate — essayEssay · sent 2 Jun
Returned · 17/20Strong central argument — the Tacoma Narrows section is the best writing you’ve sent. Your middle third drifts into description; cut the history, keep the mechanism. Conclusion earns its claim. Resubmit the middle third only if you want a second pass.
— SJ, 11 Junbridges-marked.pdf