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The theory breaks down once the cheaper sellers run out of stock.1 Reading Dani Rodrik's "Economics Rules" helped me understand this.2 He compares economic models to maps.3

  1. 1
    The theory does not break down here

    The theory does not "break down" when a seller runs out of stock. The single-price result assumes a seller can serve the whole market, so capacity is something the model assumes away, not something it gets wrong.

  2. 2
    Understand what?

    You have not raised a question for the book to answer. It is also a very common book in economics statements, so what you take from it has to go beyond the obvious.

  3. 3
    The maps analogy is the basic summary

    The maps analogy is the most basic summary point a casual reader with no economics background would take from the book.

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